Writing in Room 6.

During the last holidays I attended a Gaye Byers writing course. I have been using some of the ideas in the class. This is one of the marking ideas that I have adapted to suit the age and ability of the children in Room 6. 

I saw a little hedgehog. It has some prickles on it. It has black fur.

This term we are concentrating on writing quality stories rather than quantity. So we are taking our sentences and trying to use exciting words in them. Here is some of our work.

In this classroom we are learning to do a good sentence. It is very hard work.

My toy is a transformer and it is blue. I pretend my transformer can fly in the sky in the morning.

I saw an acorn ready to eat on my big tree but a bird came down and he ate the acorn. It was a fantail.